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What Do You Think Of This Opening...?

Question by Pryncez Sweetii | Posted in Books & Authors

to my digest...

Being an average seventeen year old living in the outskirts of London is easy enough when your father isn’t missing, you’re not the count one victim of the school bullies and you don’t have a secret which burns you

Answer: hey

wondering if you knew about this emotional attachment

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What Do You Think Of This Opening...?

Question by Pryncez Sweetii | Posted in Board Games

to my digest...

Being an average seventeen year old living in the outskirts of London is easy enough when your father isn’t missing, you’re not the compute one victim of the school bullies and you don’t have a secret which burns you

Answer: As for oneself I didn't like the flow of it. Nothing wrong with the content or anything, just how it's arranged/phrased. I had to announce it through twice until I got what you were trying to say.

I'd go with something like:
 

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